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Currently there is a trend towards the use of alternative forms of medicine. However, at best these methods are ineffective, and at worst they may be dangerous. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

Currently there is a trend towards the use of alternative forms of medicine. However, at best these methods are ineffective, and at worst they may be dangerous. erbp
Recently, there has been a widespread controversy about substitute methods for medications. Some believe that these new procedures are futile and can be hazardous to health. I strongly agree with this viewpoint and this essay will discuss reasons why its unhelpful and deadly to use other means of treatment. To start with, perhaps the foremost reason why another method of medications are inefficient is because there is no scientific proof of these therapies. This implies that researcher has not taken the sample for a thesis and there is no concrete evidence to be effective for disease conditions. Similar reason is that most of these traditional means of treatment are harmful and and can be insecure because of its adverse effects. This is due to the fact that there is no accurate dosage or drugs calculation in accordance with patients health condition. To cite an example, recent study reveals that the most significant proportion of patients with severe diseases complications rely on the use of alternative means of drugs. Thus, it can be demonstrated that is very harmful and incompetent to use other types of remedy for curing of disease. Although some people believe that other means of treatment can be helpful and effective than the modern medicine due to its chemical combination and previous usage of these therapies to combat with disease conditions. This is due to the fact that the herbs contents is well-prepared for different types of iilesss and have been tested by many people. For example such as Acupuncture have been known to relieve different types of pain. Likewise, if appropriate information about dosage and usage of drugs is given can promote it's effectiveness. Nevertheless, research has proven otherwise that others factors such as adequate rest can promote patients health condition. In conclusion, this essay discussed the reasons why another form of treatment therapy can be fruitless and bad for patients health condition. i strongly concurred to this viewpoint because it seems logical to assert that it has not being scientifically accepted and there is no proper dosage for its measurements.
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believe that these new procedures are futile and can be hazardous to
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health
. I
strongly
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agree
with this viewpoint and this essay will discuss
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reasons
why its unhelpful and deadly to
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use
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other
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means
of
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treatment
. To
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start
with, perhaps the foremost
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reason
why another method of medications are inefficient is
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because
there is no scientific proof of these therapies.
This implies that
researcher has not taken the sample for a thesis and there is no concrete evidence to be effective for disease conditions. Similar
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reason
is that most of these traditional
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means
of
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treatment
are harmful
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and and
can be insecure
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because
of its adverse effects.
This is due to the fact that
there is no accurate dosage or drugs calculation in accordance with
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patients
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health
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condition
. To cite an example, recent study reveals that the most significant proportion of
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patients
with severe diseases complications rely on the
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use
of alternative
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means
of drugs.
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, it can
be demonstrated
that is
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very
harmful and incompetent to
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use
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other
types of remedy for curing of disease.

Although
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some
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people
believe that
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other
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means
of
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treatment
can be helpful and effective than the modern medicine due to its chemical combination and previous usage of these therapies to combat with disease conditions.
This is due to the fact that
the herbs contents is well-prepared for
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different
types of
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and have been
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tested
by
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many
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people
.
For example
such as Acupuncture have
been known
to relieve
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different
types of pain.
Likewise
, if appropriate information about dosage and usage of drugs is
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given
can promote
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it's
effectiveness.
Nevertheless
, research has proven
otherwise
that others factors such as adequate rest can promote
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patients
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health
condition.

In conclusion
, this essay discussed the
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reasons
why another form of
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treatment
therapy can be fruitless and
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bad
for
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patients
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health
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condition
.
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i
strongly
concurred to this viewpoint
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because
it seems logical to assert that it has not being
scientifically
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accepted
and there is no proper dosage for its measurements.
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IELTS essay Currently there is a trend towards the use of alternative forms of medicine. However, at best these methods are ineffective, and at worst they may be dangerous.

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
344 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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