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what are the disadvantages of being self employed .

what are the disadvantages of being self employed. KwW06

In these days numerous people like to open their own business instead of doing job in a company or an organisation. In this essay I would like to talk about disadvantages of doing our own job. There are numerous reasons Of being self employed but one of the major reason is unemployment. For instance, in India population is the root cause of all other problems which leads to unemployment. About more than half of population are working as self employed. Although, the only one major advantage of being self employed is you are your own boss and you decide how, when and where you work. But if an individual is working for a company they enjoy various social security benefits. Sometimes they get handsome salary and perks. In contrast, besides advantages they also have disadvantages too. There are many challenges of being self employed. As we can see that people take loan from the bank to open their own business while they become bankrupt due to failure in business. Meanwhile, they are also not able to pay salary of their employs. There is no fixed income as well as secured funds like provident fund for future. Another cause is workers betray their head because of not paying salary on time. There is also distraction at home if we work from home and we are not socially connected with large amount of people. If they not have quality staff then business will not get success. In conclusion, people prefer to open their own businesses in these days because of unemployment and they would like to become boss of their own. There is unpredictable salary and they also face many challenges. But as being a self employed a person can develops a quality of leadership and manage their obstacles.

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people
 like to open their This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldworkemploymenttrade
business
instead
 of doing job in a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 or an Possible spelling mistake. 'organisation' is British English.organization
organisation
. In this essay I would like to talk about disadvantages of doing our This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
 job.

There are numerous reasons Of being self You use this word too often, consider replacing it withoccupiedhiredengaged
employed
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 one of the major reason is unemployment. For instance
, in India population is the root cause of all other problems which leads to unemployment. About more than half of population are working as self You use this word too often, consider replacing it withoccupiedhiredengaged
employed
. Although, the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 one major advantage of being self You use this word too often, consider replacing it withoccupiedhiredengaged
employed
 is you are your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
 boss and you decide how, when and where you work. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 if an individual is working for a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 they enjoy various social security benefits. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :in some instances
Sometimes
 they This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 handsome You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagefeepaystipendearningsincome
salary
 and perks.

In contrast
, besides
 advantages they also
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many
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employed
. “As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
 we can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 take loan from the bank to open their This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldworkemploymenttrade
business
 while they become bankrupt due to failure in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldworkemploymenttrade
business
. Meanwhile, they are also
 not able to pay You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagefeepaystipendearningsincome
salary
 of their employs. There is no This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :rectified
fixed
 income as well
 as secured funds like provident fund for future. Another cause is workers betray their head This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of not paying You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagefeepaystipendearningsincome
salary
 on time. There is also
 distraction at home if we work from Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).home, and
home and
 we are not socially
 connected with large amount of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
. If they not have quality staff then You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldworkemploymenttrade
business
 will not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 success.

In conclusion
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 prefer to open their This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldworkemploymenttrade
businesses
 in these days This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).unemployment, and
unemployment and
 they would like to become boss of their This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
. There is unpredictable You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagefeepaystipendearningsincome
salary
 and they also
 face This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 challenges. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 as being a self You use this word too often, consider replacing it withoccupiedhiredengaged
employed
 a person can The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: "develop"develop
develops
 a quality of leadership and manage their obstacles. 