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Talk about person who is a good cook how you know the person when you meet this person what food item this person cooks well

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food is necessary for all I know many cooks in my life here I would like to talk about the person who cooks well she is my mother I met with her in childhood she also lives in my house she prepare many types of food like Italy and Chinese and Punjabi she has much ingredients to make food delicious my favourite food is Punjabi she also make Punjabi food for me she told me she had won many prizes in food competition in our village
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food
is necessary for all I know
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many
cooks in my life here I would like to talk about the person who cooks well she is my mother I met with her in childhood she
also
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lives
in my
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house
she
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prepare
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many
types of
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food
like Italy and Chinese and Punjabi she has
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much
ingredients to
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make
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food
delicious my
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favourite
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food
is Punjabi she
also
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make
Punjabi
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food
for me she
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told
me she had won
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many
prizes in
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competition in our village

IELTS essay Talk about person who is a good cook how you know the person when you meet this person what food item this person cooks well

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
85 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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