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the manufacturing and use of cars damages the environment but their popularity is increasingly . why is this happening how could this be controlled

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Needless to say, damaging environment is a primary concern. The main causes are production companies and excessive use of cars but demand of cars is increasing. So, this eassy will discuss about causes of environment damage and methods to resolve this problems in upcoming paragraphs. To commence with, there are various reasons behind destruction of environment. The predominant one is, the manufacturing facilities produce huge waste. It also leads pollution. To explain it, environment is polluting due to factories waste. For example, it the waste will not dispose properly, it will cause land pollution. Secondly, the gasses are coming out from vehicles and there gasses also responsible for air pollution. Thus, the land pollution and air pollution is result of manufacturing facilities. The despite of above reasons. cars are popular because they are convenient and affordable also people can travel easily. There are various different methods available, in order to minimize the pollution and to intact environment safe. Primarily, some policies can be imposed by the government. For instant, odd even rule for vehicles. In addition, the authority should have to take strict action against factories, those do not follow proper disposable techniques. Thus, the government can do many things to control this problem such as, the authority can make rules and give punishment against owners of factories. who will not follow disposable waste techniques. to conclude, there is no doubt popularity of cars has been increasing day by day also it inviting the environment problems such as air and land pollution. But to overcomes these issues. the government should design some guidelines.
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environment
is a primary concern. The main causes are production
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companies
and excessive
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use
of
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cars
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but
demand of
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cars
is increasing.
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will
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discuss about causes
of
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environment
damage and methods to resolve this problems in upcoming paragraphs.

To commence with, there are various reasons behind destruction of
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environment
. The predominant one is, the manufacturing facilities produce huge
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waste
. It
also
leads
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pollution
. To
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explain
it,
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environment
is polluting due to factories
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waste
.
For example
, it the
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waste
will not dispose
properly
, it will cause land
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pollution
.
Secondly
, the gasses are coming out from vehicles and there gasses
also
responsible for air
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pollution
.
Thus
, the land
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pollution
and air
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pollution
is result of manufacturing facilities. The
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despite of
above reasons.
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cars
are popular
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because
they are convenient and affordable
also
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people
can travel
easily
.

There are various
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different
methods available, in order to minimize the
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pollution
and to intact
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environment
safe.
Primarily
,
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some
policies can
be imposed
by the
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government
. For instant, odd even
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rule
for vehicles.
In addition
, the authority should
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have to
take strict action against factories, those do not follow proper disposable techniques.
Thus
, the
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government
can do
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many
things to control this problem such as, the authority can
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make
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rules
and give punishment against owners of factories.
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who
will not follow disposable
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waste
techniques.

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to
conclude, there is no doubt popularity of
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cars
has been increasing day by day
also
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it inviting
the
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environment
problems such as air and land
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pollution
.
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But
to overcomes these issues.
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the
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government
should design
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some
guidelines.
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IELTS essay the manufacturing and use of cars damages the environment but their popularity is increasingly. why is this happening how could this be controlled

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
263 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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