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I. Air travel is preferred by rich people only . Majority of the people receive no benefits from the development of air travel as an industry

I. Air travel is preferred by rich people only. Majority of the people receive no benefits from the development of air travel as an industry g5Dxa
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can develop their physical and mental ability if they play
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they can Dev away from drugs and other
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the above points I
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IELTS essay I. Air travel is preferred by rich people only. Majority of the people receive no benefits from the development of air travel as an industry

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  American English
1 paragraphs
187 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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