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What are the causes of global warming

Average of global temperature has increased recently, which causes many people of the world to get concerned. This essay expresses reasons of global warming and recommends some solutions for this problem. Greenhouse gases are believed to be main reason of global warming. The most important these gases is carbon dioxide. Human activities including use of fossil fuels and industrial pollutants produced of factories release large amount of carbon dioxide into the atmosphere. Existence of these gases in the atmosphere causes to trap solar radiation. As a result, our planet gets warm. On the other hand, the gases remain in the atmosphere for many years and may damage to Ozone layer which protects the Earth from solar radiation. Furthermore, another reason of global warming is burning and destruction of forests. In the last few years, its said that forests burning has been extended. If plants burn, carbon dioxide gas release and enter into the atmosphere. There are some potential ways that help to solve this problem. First of all, optimal consume of fossil fuels. We should use less personal vehicle which works with this fuel and use public transport. Secondly, utilization of alternative energies consist of windy and solar energies. Last but not the least, planting of trees and prevention of forest destruction. Although global warming is an important issue these days and makes many problems for people over the world, governments and individuals can apply these solutions that have been recommended. Thus, they have considerable role in reduce reasons of global warming.
Average of
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temperature has increased recently, which causes
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many
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people
of the world to
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concerned. This essay expresses
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reasons
of
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global
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warming
and recommends
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solutions for this problem.

Greenhouse
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gases
are believed
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reason
of
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global
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warming
. The most
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these
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gases
is carbon dioxide. Human activities including
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use
of fossil fuels and industrial pollutants produced of factories release large amount of carbon dioxide into the atmosphere. Existence of these
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gases
in the atmosphere causes
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to trap
solar radiation.
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, our planet
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warm.
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, the
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gases
remain in the atmosphere for
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years and may damage to Ozone layer which protects the Earth from solar radiation.

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of
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global
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is burning and destruction of forests. In the last few years, its said that forests burning has
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. If plants burn, carbon dioxide gas release and enter into the atmosphere.

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potential ways that
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less personal vehicle which works with this fuel and
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use
public transport.
Secondly
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not the least, planting of trees and prevention of forest destruction.

Although
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is an
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important
issue these days and
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makes
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problems for
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people
over the world,
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governments
and individuals can apply these solutions that have
been recommended
.
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reduce
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reasons
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IELTS essay What are the causes of global warming

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
252 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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