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i like to go on a trp with a companion

i like to go on a trp with a companion peDm2
Travelling is an enjoyable and wonderful experience. You can choose to travel with a companion or travel alone on your own on your trip. Personally, I think that it is a great idea to travel with a partner. I state my opinion for the following reasons. First of all, having a companion in your journey make your trip safer. If you travel alone, the risk of being scammed is often very high. Because a solo traveler often easily fooled than a traveler with companion. Those scam case can lead to a heavy physical and mental damage. However, if you have a travel companion, you can watch out for each other easier and became harder targets for scammers. Secondly, it would be a good and simple way to strengthen bonds and relationships, especially if the two people involved are intimate with each other. Most likely, the two people will spend much more time together than what they might typically do. On their journey, they will share experiences and difficulties that they have gone through with each other. Those things will create a unique bond that hard to get and make them understand your companion more than ever. In conclusion, I definitely prefer to travel with a companion rather than alone. This is because this way is safer and the connection with that it bring.
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with a partner. I state my opinion for the following reasons.
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, having a
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companion
in your journey
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make
your trip safer. If you
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travel
alone, the
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of
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a solo traveler
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often
easily
fooled than a traveler with
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companion
. Those scam case can lead to a heavy physical and mental damage.
However
, if you have a
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travel
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companion
, you can
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out for each other easier and became harder targets for scammers.
Secondly
, it would be a
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good
and simple way to strengthen bonds and relationships,
especially
if the two
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involved are intimate with each other.

Most likely, the two
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people
will spend much more time together than what they might
typically
do. On their journey, they will share experiences and difficulties

that they have gone through with each other. Those things will create a unique bond that
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hard
to
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them understand your
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companion
more than ever.
In conclusion
, I definitely prefer to
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travel
with a
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companion
rather
than alone. This is
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this way is safer and the connection with that it bring.
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IELTS essay i like to go on a trp with a companion

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
223 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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