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DESCRIBE THE PERSONALITY OF A PERSON

DESCRIBE THE PERSONALITY OF A PERSON L3EYp

My brother has always been my companion throughout my life. Since I was born, besides my parents, my brother has always been the one to take care of me. He is a tall and thin young man with curly dark hair. Here are a few highlights of his personality. He is an extrovert who always makes people happy. He has a group of friends and he is friendly with them. He has a great sense of humor and always makes us laugh every time we meet. He is always polite and respectful to the elders. He always does well at home and at school, but sometimes he criticizes himself because he thinks he should have done it better.

My brother has always been my companion throughout my life. Since I was born
, besides
 my parents, my brother has always been the one to take care of me. He is a tall and thin young This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualresidentcitizen
man
 with curly dark hair. Here are a few highlights of his personality. He is an extrovert who always This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createsconstructsmanufacturesproduces
makes
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 happy. He has a group of Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).friends, and
friends and
 he is friendly with them. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
He
 has a great sense of humor and always This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createsconstructsmanufacturesproduces
makes
 us laugh every time we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
He
 is always polite and respectful to the elders. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
He
 always does well at home and at school, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :in some instances
sometimes
 he criticizes himself This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 he This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonsassumesbelievesconsiders
thinks
 he should have done it better. 