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Describe the most important thing you do to stay healthy. Who taught you this behavior, and how have they modeled it for you? Why do you think it is important?

Describe the most important thing you do to stay healthy. Who taught you this behavior, and how have they modeled it for you? Why do you think it is important? 5kNPP
firts and foremost, when I was a young i usd to play soccer and play basketball; I suppose that sports help my for I have good condtion. Seconldy, I enter to the univeristy and I leaned about the food healthy, a great example of this is when I have been cooking I put only healthy product as carrots or fish. For that reason in this my boby is fit and healthy, although, in the some time I ate some fast food but is only when I meeting with my friends. To summary, I think the best way for you vae healthy is good food and a lot
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, I enter to the
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univeristy
and I leaned about the food
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, a great example of this is when I have been cooking I put
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healthy
product as carrots or fish. For that reason in this my
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, although, in the
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food
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the best way for you
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IELTS essay Describe the most important thing you do to stay healthy. Who taught you this behavior, and how have they modeled it for you? Why do you think it is important?

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
106 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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