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some people believe htat the clothes people wear are the most important indication of what they are like

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Clothes help protect body. Some people believe that garments can reflect who they are. Others have an opposite statement which they cannot appraise citizens just from the clothing. I firmly believe that clothes have main role int the individual’s life although there is a difference argument about the issue. I will discuss in this upcoming paragraph. To commence with the first notion, there are myriads thing to be shared in its favor. First and foremost, nowadays people judge another person personality and behavior through their dress, but people wear clothes only it can make them comfortable when they do their jobs and activities. For example, farmers always wear kurta and pajama which this is very different with an employee. Indirectly, this show that clothes can describe who they are based on what they gain. Shifting towards the second school of thought. Clothes do not just protect the body from the harmful rays of the sun. people these days consider fashion are important part who they are. Celebrities always have up to date lifestyle and they always wear a trending dress. So, fans are also following this trend. Evidence of this can be seen that clothing gives a huge impact of socialize. In conclusion, people of thoughts are prevalent in society. I personally believe that, people have own choice what they want to wear and nobody can distinguish the character of a person by the clothes they wear
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have main role int the individual’s life although there is a difference argument about the issue. I will discuss in this upcoming paragraph.

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notion, there are myriads thing to
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and foremost, nowadays
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them comfortable when they do their jobs and activities.
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kurta
and pajama which this is
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with an employee.
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part who they are. Celebrities always have up to date
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lifestyle and
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a trending dress.
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, fans are
also
following this trend. Evidence of this can be
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that clothing gives a huge impact of socialize.

In conclusion
,
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IELTS essay some people believe htat the clothes people wear are the most important indication of what they are like

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
236 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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