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What are the advantages and disadvantages of working in same place as other members of your family? Give reasons or examples to support your opinion?

What are the advantages and disadvantages of working in same place as other members of your family? Give reasons or examples to support your opinion? m1Xyn
A job is essential to live in society. Working with relatives can be great as well as challenging. It is evident therefore that work is worship, as it’s a way to pay for our living. Firstly, this essay will discuss how the members of the same family working in the same firm understand and respect each other. Secondly, it will show how there are occasions become challenging and uncomfortable situations. To begin with, it’s a great advantage of working with relatives in the same organization are able to share details about their work lives in a more intimate and understanding way. In addition, to increase the emotional bonds between family members can actually have a positive effort on individual performance and company results. For instance, if you are struggling to get along with your boss, your relative is a great way to involved and help you. That is why we can honestly say that it’s a great privilege to work together and thoughtful choices will influence how supportive that experience turns out for you On the other hand, working with family members in the same area of organisation may lead to challenging and uncomfortable situations. Furthermore, emotional ties between people who are related may negatively affect their decision and professional growth. For example, personal, family problems or work issues brought to the work place this may lead to uncomfortable situations to other employees. That is why, it is very important to take tough decisions that will have a negative impact on another family member. To sum up, it is obvious that everyone has to work hard to find a place in the competing world. The things that make working firms so wonderful are the family involvement, the highly personal relationship and commitment, but they also make them challenging to sustain for the long term.
A job is essential to
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live
in society.
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Working
with relatives can be
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great
as well
as
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challenging
. It is evident
therefore
that
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work
is worship, as it’s a way to pay for our living.
Firstly
, this essay will discuss how the members of the same
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family
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working
in the same firm understand and respect each other.
Secondly
, it will
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show
how there are occasions become
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challenging
and uncomfortable situations.

To
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begin
with, it’s a
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great
advantage of
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working
with relatives in the same organization are able to share
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details
about their
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work
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lives
in a more intimate and understanding way.
In addition
, to increase the emotional bonds between
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family
members can actually have a
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positive
effort on individual performance and
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company
results.
For instance
, if you are struggling to
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get
along with your boss, your relative is a
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great
way to involved and
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help
you.
That is
why we can
honestly
say that it’s a
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great
privilege to
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work
together and thoughtful choices will influence how supportive that experience turns out for you

On the other hand
,
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working
with
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family
members in the same area of
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organisation
may lead to
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challenging
and uncomfortable situations.
Furthermore
, emotional ties between
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people
who
are related
may
negatively
affect their decision and professional growth.
For example
, personal,
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family
problems or
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work
issues brought to the
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work
place this may lead to uncomfortable situations to other employees.
That is
why, it is
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very
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important
to take tough decisions that will have a
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negative
impact on another
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family
member.

To sum up, it is obvious that everyone
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has to
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work
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hard
to find a place in the competing world. The things that
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make
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working
firms
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so
wonderful are the
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family
involvement, the
highly
personal relationship and commitment,
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but
they
also
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make
them
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challenging
Did you mean "sustaining"? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'challenge' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
to sustain
for the long term.
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IELTS essay What are the advantages and disadvantages of working in same place as other members of your family? Give reasons or examples to support your opinion?

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
304 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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