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What are the advantages and disadvantages of eating fast food?

In a time where the types of fast food are rapidly developing, it is accessible that fast food is at its pick among the multitudes. There are useful and useless sides in dining of fast food. In this paper, the merits and demerits will be discussed by the writer and will give a conclusion. (55 words) Commencing with advantages of fast food, of the basic positives of fast foods, we can save precious time. Eating other meals may take much time. Therefore, people who have not free time can use in that conditions. (39 words) Secondly, the price of fast food is more tranquilize than other meals’. Likewise, a multitude of people want cheaper repasts. Consequently, entrepreneurs who work with that way must be responsible for their job. In addition, they must start better facilities for eaters. (42 words) On the other hand, fast foods are the basic reason for obesity. What is needed for obviating the obesity? A majority of people eat these sorts of meals, but it has very noxious sides. For instance, people prefer fast food and it is a big reason. Likewise, they prefer eating fast food to dining other meals. (56 words) Another issue is that, people are getting lazier and lazier by eating fast food. Before eating this type of repasts, they prepared or cooked meal themselves, after that they strive more than other training. For example: running, playing, reading or listening. (41words To draw a conclusion, there are a whole host of positives of fast food. Notwithstanding that the negatives cannot be also overlooked. It is this writer’s perspective that, the merits of fast food can subsequently outstrip its demerits. (38 words)
In a
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time where
the types of
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fast
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are
rapidly
developing, it is accessible that
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fast
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food
is at its pick among the multitudes. There are useful and useless sides in dining of
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fast
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food
. In this paper, the merits and demerits will
be discussed
by the writer and will give a conclusion. (55 words)

Commencing with advantages of
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fast
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food
, of the basic positives of
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fast
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foods
, we can save precious
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time
.
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Eating
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other
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meals
may take much
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time
.
Therefore
,
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people
who have not free
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time
can
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use
in that conditions. (39 words)

Secondly
, the price of
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fast
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food
is more tranquilize than
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other
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meals’
.
Likewise
, a multitude of
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people
want cheaper repasts.
Consequently
, entrepreneurs who work with that way
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must
be responsible for their job.
In addition
, they
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must
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start
better facilities for eaters. (42 words)

On the
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other
hand,
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fast
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foods
are the basic reason for obesity. What
is needed
for obviating the obesity? A majority of
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people
eat these sorts of
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meals
,
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but
it has
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very
noxious sides.
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prefer
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food and
it is a
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reason.
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, they prefer
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eating
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fast
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food
to dining
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other
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meals
. (56 words)

Another issue is that,
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people
are getting lazier and lazier by
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eating
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fast
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food
.
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Before
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eating
this type of repasts, they prepared or cooked
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meal
themselves, after that they strive more than
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other
training.
For example
: running, playing, reading or listening.
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To draw a conclusion, there are a whole
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of positives of
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fast
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food
. Notwithstanding that the negatives cannot be
also
overlooked. It is this writer’s perspective that, the merits of
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fast
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food
can
subsequently
outstrip its demerits. (38 words)
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IELTS essay What are the advantages and disadvantages of eating fast food?

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
278 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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