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What are some solutions to the issue of drug abuse?

What are some solutions to the issue of drug abuse? DaB3m
Drug abuse it is a using of psychoactive substances, which brings temporary and false positive emotions, but causes harm to human health. After drugs person have a many different problems with health such as a mental and physical dependence, strange behavior, people can lose an ability to work and learn. Although these issues are becoming increasingly concerning, there are some solutions for saving people from the danger of drug abuse. For example, toughening punishments or strengthening the work of anti-drug officers, search for sites selling prohibited substances and their elimination.
Drug abuse it is a using of psychoactive substances, which brings temporary and false
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emotions,
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causes harm to human health. After drugs person have a
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problems with health such as a mental and physical dependence, strange behavior,
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people
can lose an ability to work and learn. Although these issues are becoming
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solutions for saving
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people
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, toughening punishments or strengthening the work of anti-drug officers, search for sites selling prohibited substances and their elimination.

IELTS essay What are some solutions to the issue of drug abuse?

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