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What advertisements do you like?

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The advertisements of the Turkish Airlines in the last few years have attracted my attention. Turkish Airlines (Turkish: Türk Hava Yolları) is the national flag carrier airline of Turkey. As of August 2019, it operates scheduled services to 315 destinations in Europe, Asia, Africa, and the Americas, making it the largest mainline carrier in the world by number of passenger destinations. The airline serves more destinations non-stop from a single airport than any other airline in the world, and flies to 126 countries, more than any other airline. With an operational fleet of 24 cargo aircraft, the airline's cargo division serves 82 destinations. The services of these airlines are very convenient and in addition, special discounts are always provided for students throughout the year.
The advertisements of the Turkish Airlines in the last few years have attracted my attention. Turkish Airlines (Turkish:
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Türk
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Hava
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Yolları
) is the national flag carrier airline of Turkey. As of August 2019, it operates scheduled services to 315
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destinations
in Europe, Asia, Africa, and the Americas, making it the largest mainline carrier in the world by number of passenger
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destinations
. The airline serves more
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destinations
non-
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from a single airport than any other airline in the world, and flies to 126 countries, more than any other airline. With an operational fleet of 24 cargo aircraft, the airline's cargo division serves 82
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destinations
. The services of these airlines are
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convenient and
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, special discounts are always provided for students throughout the year.
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IELTS essay What advertisements do you like?

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124 words
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