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My job at the moment and the future

My job at the moment and the future Rkml8
To develop my academic career, at the moment, I define research projects and collaborate with various research groups, ranging from EMRI and NRC to CCERCI, TUOMS, etc. I advocate, although it's a heavy workload, but not categorized as a job, since I don't get any wage. Creating well cooperation with famous scientists is the only benefit for me. After the COVID-19 condition, I would like to apply for a Ph. D. position at a top university. During the Ph. D. study, not only can I become a research assistant, but I can also work with my background-related enterprises. If I want to point out some of the criteria which I have been established for my in the years ahead job, well-paid and rewarding job in my own field is the essential criteria. In my viewpoint, not only are women able to work, but they can also play a pivotal role in each area of a fast-changing society. Therefore, governments should bring about a suitable platform for women to develop their careers and come true to their dreams.
To develop my academic career, at the moment, I define research projects and collaborate with various research groups, ranging from
EMRI
and NRC to
CCERCI
,
TUOMS
, etc.

I advocate, although it's a heavy workload,
but
not categorized as a job, since I don't
get
any wage. Creating well cooperation with
famous
scientists is the
only
benefit for me. After the COVID-19 condition, I would like to apply for a
Ph. D.
position at a top university. During the
Ph. D.
study, not
only
can I become a research assistant,
but
I can
also
work with my background-related enterprises.

If I want to point out
some of the
criteria which I have
been established
for my in the years ahead job, well-paid and rewarding job in my
own
field is the essential criteria. In my viewpoint, not
only
are women able to work,
but
they can
also
play a pivotal role in each area of a
fast
-changing society.
Therefore
,
governments
should bring about a suitable platform for women to develop their careers and
come
true to their dreams.
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IELTS essay My job at the moment and the future

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
177 words
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