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Children and teenagers committing more and more. What are the reason and solutions crime

Children and teenagers committing more and more. What are the reason and solutions crime NmKmm
It is well said that 'today 's children are the future of tomorrow. Presently, the ratio of crime by juveniles and adults are increasing like a wild fire. Here, I would like to account it's reasons along with it's solutions. Manifold reasons are there behind this phenomenon. First and foremost, unemployment, inflation, are the main factor of this issue. To illustrate, number of young educated people more than the number of vaccancy and inflation is increasing day by day. Therefore, lack of jobs unemployed teenagers do crimes such as rovery, kidnapping, and many others in order to get money for two square meal. Apart from it, hectic schedule of parents also responsible. for example, both parent involved in work for bread and butter and they have not sufficient time for their juveniles. They are unable to provide them moral and social values and children watch crime programs on television in the absence of parents. As a result, lack of social and moral values stimulate children for crime. Numerous remedial measure are there to solve this worrying concern. Initially, administration try to reduce the inflation and confer employment to litterate young people so that they stay away from crime. Further, parents must nourish their children with Supreme traits. People must be awared by the drawbacks of overpopulation which enhance the number of problems in society. To recapitulate, Undeniably, crime rate is the big issue. However, still believe that government and people should take join responsibility to nip this evil in the bud.
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are the future of tomorrow.
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, the ratio of
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crime
by juveniles and adults are increasing like a
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wild fire
. Here, I would like
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Manifold reasons are there behind this phenomenon.
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and foremost, unemployment, inflation, are the main factor of this issue. To illustrate, number of young educated
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people
more than the number of
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vaccancy
and inflation is increasing day by day.
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, kidnapping, and
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money for two square meal. Apart from it, hectic schedule of
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involved in work for bread and
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they have not sufficient time for their juveniles. They are unable to provide them moral and social values and
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programs on television in the absence of
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.
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children
for crime.

Numerous remedial measure are there to solve this worrying concern.
Initially
, administration try to
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young
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that they stay away from
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nourish their
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with Supreme traits.
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by the drawbacks of overpopulation which enhance the number of problems in society.

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rate is the
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responsibility to nip this evil in the bud.
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IELTS essay Children and teenagers committing more and more. What are the reason and solutions crime

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
251 words
5.5
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