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What advantages do volunteering programs bring about?

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There are many benefits that volunteering programs can bring to young people, especially university students. First, by participating in these programs, these students can socialize with their peers and gain more experiences to add to their CVs. In addition, these programs are often community-based. I mean their benefits will spread throughout the community. So, I believe volunteering is an area where we should pay more attention.

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