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Well, I'd like to talk to you about an important project of mine coming up

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Well, I'd like to talk to you about an important project of mine coming up. I am going to plan to go abroad to continue studying. I decided to go abroad because I was really fond of exploring the world. I’m going to come New Zealand. It’s located in the Southern Hemisphere, on the continent of Oceania, and its nearest neighbor is Australia. It is quite far away from where I live, so I haven’t yet had the chance to visit. I’ll be there soon though. There are many reasons that I would like to come NewZealand. For one thing, it looks like a stunningly beautiful country. Its natural scenery seems captivating to me, and I’d love to travel around seeing the mountains and rugged coastline. In these places, there are many amazing animals to see, and I’m a big fan of wildlife watching. In addition, New Zealand is a country with a developed education system. I will learn many things in this country. And New Zealand has a long cend fascinating history, which I’d like to explore. New Zealand seems like a good country to visit for those reasons as well as because it is a modern nation with a good tourist infrastructure. I will come to this beautiful country soon.
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project of mine coming up. I am going to plan to go abroad to continue studying. I decided to go abroad
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. Its natural scenery seems captivating to me, and I’d
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love
to travel around seeing the mountains and rugged coastline. In these places, there are
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amazing animals to
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fan of wildlife watching.
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with a developed education system. I will learn
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fascinating history, which I’d like to explore.
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it is a modern nation with a
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IELTS essay Well, I'd like to talk to you about an important project of mine coming up

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
212 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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