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How important is music in your life? do you usually listen to music ? Have you ever been to a live concert?

How important is music in your life? do you usually listen to music? Have you ever been to a live concert? mX9DK
I think music is one crucial part in everyone's live, personally I love all types of music and I heard many different types of it, but my favourites types of music are 80s rock with bands like AC DC and actual rap with artist like Kendrick Lamar or Kanye West. As a important part of my life I listen to music very often, especially when I am doing my homework, studying or just running. Despite the fact that I love music, I have never been to a live concert due to in my city there isn't many concerts and frequently they brought less relevant artist In conclusion music is a very important part of my life and it helps me motivates, relax and have a good time.
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IELTS essay How important is music in your life? do you usually listen to music? Have you ever been to a live concert?

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
127 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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