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Well, I think it depend on company’s needs

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Well, I think it depend on company’s needs. If company’s needs is communication and collaboration between employees, managers, and leadership, the company will have a tendency favored open office space. But For financial services, hedge funds and law firms, the traditional office space layout is usually best. Because Traditional office spaces don’t only give employees quiet, but also private offices or areas to work and handle clients and confidential information, as well as collaborative, shared space. Beside, Contiguous Office Space, Shared Office Space
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IELTS essay Well, I think it depend on company’s needs

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  American English
1 paragraphs
82 words
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