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Community Service by Shoplifters

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Have you ever seen a person who is shoplifting at a mall or supermarket? Video surveillance systems are obviously performed to prevent such theft. However, a number of thieves would utilize some techniques to reach their purpose. To overcome these common scenes, police have managed to pass a law which says shoplifters should do community service by dedicating themselves to communal issues. The guilty human would be forced to work at the same place that shoplifting had happend. By this, the person may get familiar with the hardship and endeavor in that career; hence, he or she will feel sympathy at the next time — if the next time is going to take place. This is an efficient method to teach people how to explore different points of view. If the work is going to be done in a quite pleasant way, it is probable that the person would be hired there. Community service is not limited by working in society, but striving to work for it. A number of shoplifters may be able to do the duty at a mall or office. On the contrary many more might not have time to perform these because of their marital status. A father, who has stolen something, should work from home. In this way, other family members can help him, which results in creating a close-knit family for him. Overall, Community service is capable of altering personalities of shoplifters in numerous admirable ways. It is imperative that the person comprehend the hardships and attemps of working. These people may take advantage of showing their responsiblities to the society in order to find a job. As it can be inferred, numerous benefits are likely to happen by the help of the community service.

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