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well, as I said before I am sophomor at academy

well, as I said before I am sophomor at academy 73PP6

well, as I said before I am sophomor at academy. Actually when I went to college, I have decided to find a part-time job to earn a little pocket money, and experience it for yourself. how blessed I am to have a job that it is servicce staff at a coffee shop near my house. Although it is not lucrative income, I still feel happy because there are very friendly colleagues here. I spend 5 hour doing the part –time job. However, I don’t only have income what I earn as a waitress, but also The part-time job serving this cafe allows me to have a lot of contact with customers, especially foreign customers. This trains me to be the most confident communicator and my English skills also increase significantly. So I preference for this job over other job.

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