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Welcoming people to watch our live telecast.

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The time has come. Today's the first day of " Weekend with Samatat" which is organised by Samatat Open Scout Group. "Weekend with Samatat" is an online camp that is only for Scouts. Now we are live telecasting the opening ceremony of this online event. We welcome you all to join us on live. We have invited some honourable guests for the opening ceremony. Let's introduce them to you guys: Cheif Guest Kazi Nazmul Haque National Commissioner ( Community Development & Health) Bangladesh Scouts. Special Guest Hasan Zaman Councillor, Group Committee Samatat Open Scout Group. Special Guest Mohammed Ameer Saad Bin Shams Deputy National Commissioner (Program) Bangladesh Scouts. Camp Chief Helal Uddin Khan Member, Group Committee Samatat Open Scout Group. Chairperson Mohammad Atiquzzaman Ripon President Samatat Open Scout Group.
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National Commissioner
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Bangladesh Scouts.

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Mohammed
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Ameer
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Deputy National Commissioner (Program)

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Helal
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IELTS essay Welcoming people to watch our live telecast.

Essay
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18 paragraphs
129 words
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