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weight problem increasing day bybday

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In this modern era, increasing weight problem are becoming popular in many nationd. In some countries the average weight of individual is escalating and their levels of health and fitness are decresing. I will disuss both causes and solution in the upcoming paragraphs First and foremost, individuals are busy in their working life. They have no time to cook food at home and they prefer the junk food, packet foods which is not good for their health as well as fast food also increase the weight problems because these foods are not hygenic which is not good. Moreover, many people are lazy they do not like to cook food at home and they liketo spend more time on internet. for instance, individuals are money minded and they spend money to buy foods instead of cooking at home. Futermore, there are many solutions of healthy and fitness level. If individuals follows healty lifestyle eating hygenice food and vegetables and fruits which is benefical and people do not suffer any diseases. In addition, if people doing yoga and exercise on daily basis and also doing physical activity reduce the weight problems. For example, there are lots of parks where people going and doing some exercises and also walking which is good for health To conclude, i believe that cooking at home is a best way to reduce weight problem and doing yoga and exercise at home in the morning time with this individuals also feel relax and active all the day
In this modern era, increasing
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weight
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are becoming popular in
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nationd
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countries the average
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weight
of
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individual
is escalating and their levels of health and fitness are
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decresing
. I will
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disuss
both causes and solution in the upcoming
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paragraphs


First
and foremost,
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individuals
are busy in their working life. They have no time to cook
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food
at
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home and
they prefer the junk
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food
, packet
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foods
which is not
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good
for their health
as well
as
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fast
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food
also
increase the
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weight
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problems
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because
these
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are not
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hygenic
which is not
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good
.
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,
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many
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are lazy they do not like to cook
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at
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home and
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spend more time on internet.
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instance,
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are money
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minded and
they spend money to
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foods
instead
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Futermore
, there are
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solutions of healthy and fitness level. If
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individuals
follows
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healty
lifestyle eating
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hygenice
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and vegetables and fruits which is
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benefical
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do not suffer any diseases.
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people
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yoga and exercise on daily basis and
also
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doing
physical activity
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reduce
the
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weight
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.
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, there are lots of parks where
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going and
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doing
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some
exercises and
also
walking which is
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good
for health

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,
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i
believe that cooking at home is
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a
best way to
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reduce
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weight
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and
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doing
yoga and exercise at home in the morning time with
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this
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individuals
also
feel relax and active all the
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day
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IELTS essay weight problem increasing day bybday

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
248 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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