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teachers should not use corporal punishment

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teachers should not use corporal punishment because it is ineffective in disciplining students and may have long-term negative effects on students. Moreover, teachers should not forget that love and understanding must be part of any kind of discipline. Discipline and love are not opposites, punishment must involve letting the children know that what they do is wrong and why punishment is necessary. Teachers should not just beat students with the hope that they will understand. It is important to maintain discipline without inflicting physical pain on students. Therefore, teachers should use effective and more humane alternatives in order to bring about permanent behavioral changes.

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