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Week 0 Photographic DNA As you are a photographer whether professional or

Week 0 Photographic DNA As you are a photographer whether professional or WynRK
Assignment 0 I am Ayman Nakib, working as a freelance photographer, looking forward to a career in Visual Documentary sector. My interest in photography grew in childhood. As a kid, whenever I saw something beautiful, I would feel an urge to take a photograph, but as a 90's kid, technology was not available at my hand to fulfill that urge, so the passion remained sleeping in my heart. I rediscovered my passion for photography when I was a 5th semester student of my university in 2016. I put together some money from tuition and bought a canon 700D camera and borrowed an 18-55 lens whose autofocus didn't work. And my journey in photography started. A short basic photography course and weekly photo adda at my university photography club helped me a lot to learn different genre of photography. Among which street photography attracted me the most. As I was always an introvert person, Street photography was the most convenient genre for me. I started exploring different streets of Sylhet and silently photographing candids. later, I also started exploring different lifestyle near Sylhet and my hometown Sherpur and started documenting daily life of the people of Bangladesh. I have also done and still doing wedding and other event photography in a small scale. But my passion is and always will be exploring different aspects of life and represent them visually though my photographs. Though I have not been able to do any striking or significant work on important issues because of lack of education and time, but I hope and believe that through better learning and education, I would be able to pursue my passion for documentary photography.
Assignment 0

I am
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Ayman
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Nakib
, working as a freelance photographer, looking forward to a career in Visual Documentary sector.

My interest in photography grew in childhood. As a kid, whenever I
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saw
something
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beautiful
, I would feel an urge to take a photograph,
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but
as a
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90's
kid, technology was not available at my hand to fulfill that urge,
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so
the
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passion
remained sleeping in my heart.

I rediscovered my
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passion
for photography when I was a 5th semester student of my university in 2016. I put together
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some
money from tuition and
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bought
a canon 700D camera and borrowed an 18-55 lens whose autofocus didn't work. And my journey in photography
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started
. A short basic photography course and weekly photo
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adda
at my university photography club
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helped
me a lot to learn
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different
genre of photography. Among which street photography attracted me the most.

As I was always an introvert person, Street photography was the most convenient genre for me. I
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started
exploring
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different
streets of
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Sylhet
and
silently
photographing
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candids
.
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later
, I
also
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started
exploring
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different
lifestyle near
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Sylhet
and my hometown
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Sherpur
and
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started
documenting daily life of the
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people
of Bangladesh.

I have
also
done and
still
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doing wedding
and other
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event
photography in a
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small
scale.
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But
my
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passion
is and
The adverb 'always' is usually put between 'will' and 'be'.
always will be
exploring
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different
aspects of life and represent them
visually
though my photographs.

Though I have not been able to do any striking or significant work on
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important
issues
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because
of lack of education and time,
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but
I hope and believe that through better learning and education, I would be able to pursue my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
passion
for documentary photography.
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IELTS essay Week 0 Photographic DNA As you are a photographer whether professional or

Essay
  American English
7 paragraphs
277 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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