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Wealthy nations should assist poorer countries with humanitarian relief during natural disasters . Do you agree or disagree ?

Many believe that in order to speak a foreign language fluently, people have to reside in the particular country. This essay agrees that living in a foreign country improves fluency but it may not be necessary. Living in other country may help one speaking skill as the environment will encourage people to speak. When people stay in a foreign country, they will get to speak to the local people when they buy something or just checking in a hotel. As a result, they have to at least learn and practice speaking, which is the key to fluency. Additionally, people can learn to use idioms and slangs as they are more common among the natives. This will help them to learn faster and efficiently. In contrast, without an opportunity to live in foreign country, they may not have the people who they can practice with. However, it is also true that there are people who learn to speak fluently in a foreign language without ever leaving their nation. As a consequence of technological development and globalization, people can access language courses that are taught by native speaker, furthermore, there are tutors that provide a one-on-one speaking courses through video calls. Therefore, this service and facility has enabled many to speak fluently in other language without having to leave their hometown. In conclusion, it is undeniable that living in a foreign country will dramatically improve the speaking skill of people coming from other places. However, due to the advancement in technology, this has been made possible without necessarily leaving one’s nation. Many believe that in order to speak a foreign language fluently, people have to reside in the particular country. This essay agrees that living in a foreign country improves fluency but it may not be necessary.
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but
it may not be necessary.

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skill
as the environment will encourage
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people
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. When
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foreign
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, they will
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to the local
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people
when they
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buy
something or
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just
checking in a hotel.
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, they
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learn
and practice speaking, which is the key to fluency.
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,
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people
can
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learn
to
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use
idioms and slangs as they are more common among the natives. This will
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learn
faster and
efficiently
.
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, without an opportunity to
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live
in
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, they may not have the
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people
who they can practice with.

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also
true that there are
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people
who
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learn
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speak
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fluently
in a
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foreign
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language
without ever leaving their nation. As a consequence of technological development and globalization,
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people
can access
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language
courses that
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by native speaker,
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Therefore
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In conclusion
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the speaking
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people
coming from other places.
However
, due to the advancement in technology, this has
been made
possible without
necessarily
leaving one’s nation.
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Many
believe that in order to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
speak
a
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foreign
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language
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
fluently
,
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people
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have to
reside in the particular
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country
. This essay
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agrees
that living in a
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foreign
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
country
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improves
fluency
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
it may not be necessary.
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IELTS essay Wealthy nations should assist poorer countries with humanitarian relief during natural disasters.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
295 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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