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Is some kids are anhelhty live nowdays

Yes yes they are because they are eating a not so good and not-so-good things to the health and it is not healthy to the life and they are in the phone always and it is their mom's parents problems and eats the they should not give a phone to their kids nowadays and they are not so how do you do the kids and it is not so healthy for them they should do the responsibilities they have to do this they must they mean they should they must do it the responsibility and the parents who'd see how their kids are and how would they do boy kitten for the homework and kids are so lazy nowadays because of this phone like my some friends that are so lazy because of the phone they want won't have any time to the book or to the school if they go to school they will always be in the phone and they will play on the something in your phone always in the phone so the parents should take their responsibilities and take their phone from them

Yes yes they are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 they are eating a not This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 and not-This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
-This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 things to the Use a comma before ‘and’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).health, and
health and
 it is not healthy to the Use a comma before ‘and’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).life, and
life and
 they are in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdialcontactcall up
phone
Use a comma before ‘and’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).always, and
always and
 it is their mom's parents problems and eats Possible typo. Did you mean “the” or “they”?thethey
the they
 should not give a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdialcontactcall up
phone
 to their You use this word too often, consider replacing it withboyinfantdaughtersonyouthteenager
kids
Use a comma before ‘and’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).nowadays, and
nowadays and
 they are not This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 how do you do the Use a comma before ‘and’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).kids, and
kids and
 it is not This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 healthy for Consider adding a comma here.them,
them
 they should do the responsibilities they This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 do this they It appears that a comma is missing.must,
must
 they mean they It appears that a comma is missing.should,
should
 they This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
 do it the responsibility and the parents who'd This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 how their You use this word too often, consider replacing it withboyinfantdaughtersonyouthteenager
kids
 are and how would they do boy kitten for the homework and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withboyinfantdaughtersonyouthteenager
kids
 are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 lazy nowadays because of this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdialcontactcall up
phone
 like my This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 friends that are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 lazy This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdialcontactcall up
phone
 they want won't have any time to the book or to the school if they go to school they will always be in the Use a comma before ‘and’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).phone, and
phone and
 they will play on the something in your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdialcontactcall up
phone
 always in the Use a comma before ‘so’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).phone,
phone
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 the parents should take their responsibilities and take their You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdialcontactcall up
phone
 from them