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Do you make your friends happy

I don't make my friends happy because they're so rude for me so I don't like them too if they won't be rude for me I won't be with and family for that and it's so bad that they're so rude so so rude there so that thing in the good things they will be so good and if you don't have any food or money they don't look for you and if you have so many things I if you don't eat will be your birthday they all be so good for you
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IELTS essay Do you make your friends happy

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
93 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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