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wealthy nations and poorer nations

wealthy nations and poorer nations aAYR9
There are so many people in the earth, there are wealthy nations and poorer nations as well. The wealthy nations have a lot of money to spend and the poorer nations have a lot of money to make. In this case the poorer nations government don't want to give people there money, that make people's status more difficult. that's way should wealthy people give bit of there wealthy to poorer people. In this world nothing are continuous
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in the earth, there are
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wealthy
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have
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a lot of
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nations
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don't want to give
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people
there money, that
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make
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people
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IELTS essay wealthy nations and poorer nations

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
76 words
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text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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