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College should provide free education for everyone?Do you agree or disagree?

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Universities must provide free education for students who are really willing to study and come from weak classess, same way even they must charge fees because they must run the insitutute and maintain well for years and payments must be given who educate them. Firstly I agree that public and private sectors must provide free education for not everyone but atleast who cannot pay the funds and some may miss the opportunity to study who are aspiring to become an engineer, doctor, reasearcher etc and there dreams get scattered due to their poverty line. But if government makes each institute as public sector and give priority to merit list of grade 10 or after grade 12. It will be benificient in two ways like one the college is gets reputation and standards keep increasing and even helpful for the students to achieve there goalsFor example the marie curie has become physicist and even won nobel prize for inventing radium and she was the one who struggled to do her higher studies as there family lost properties all of sudden investing in spiritual involvements, due to which marie and her sister struggled alot in making there own money by doing parttimes and balancing both family and saved for further studies and had the desparation to join in particular college and they both did and today we all know her exceptional work Secondly I dont completely say to make it free but for few rich kids or the ones who can pay the fees it should be charged as even government alone cannot bare the funds to run colleges for total free, as it has to pay for lecturers, maintaing the college infrastructure and many more. For example Sachin a Indian cricketer today had graduated from private college which is oxford university and his ambition was to study and adapt to new culture but his main goal was to get recognised by whole world, so he chose cricket as his favourite sport from childhood and today he did so many centuries and retired but his name reminds for young generation to they get inspired by his play. So, I would like to conclude that merit and the one who cannot the pay the fee must be encouraged by even private sectors as already they are doing but still even few well reputed colleges must also allow them so that country wont miss a aspirant.
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insitutute
and maintain well for years and payments
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educate them.
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that public and private sectors
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free
education for not everyone
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atleast
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who
cannot
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the funds and
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may miss the opportunity to
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who
are aspiring to become an engineer, doctor,
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etc and there dreams
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scattered due to their poverty line.
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government
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each institute as public sector and give priority to merit list of grade 10 or after grade 12. It will be
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benificient
in two ways like one the college is
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reputation and standards
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keep
increasing and even helpful for the students to achieve there
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goalsFor
example the
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marie curie
has become physicist and even won
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nobel prize
for inventing
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radium and
she was the one
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struggled to do her higher
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studies
as there family lost properties
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all of sudden
investing in spiritual involvements, due to which
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marie
and her sister struggled
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alot
in making there
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own
money by doing
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parttimes
and balancing both family and saved for
further
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studies
and had the
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desparation
to
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join
in particular
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college and
they both did and
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today
we all know her exceptional work
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I
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completely say to
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for few rich kids or the ones
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can
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the fees it should
be charged
as even
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alone cannot
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bare
the funds to run colleges for total
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, as it
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maintaing
the college infrastructure and
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more.
For example
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Sachin
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a
Indian cricketer
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today
had graduated from private college which is oxford university and his ambition was to
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study
and adapt to new culture
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but
his main goal was to
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get
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recognised
by whole world,
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he chose cricket as his
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sport from childhood and
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he did
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centuries and retired
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his name reminds for young generation to they
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get
inspired by his play.
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, I would like
to conclude
that merit and the one
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who
cannot the
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pay
the fee
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must
be encouraged
by even private sectors as already they are doing
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still
even few well reputed colleges
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also
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allow
them
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that country
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wont
miss
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a
aspirant.
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IELTS essay College should provide free education for everyone?

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