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Good situation and bad situation

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In this world of unknown, plant is divided into two halves whether to accept bad situation or not to agree over the same and try harder to overcome those difficult times. Both of the point have a strong hold looking over the idea of accepting the bad situation as fate. Accepting the bad times helps the brain to prepare will for that sudden low. Although, things are not in favourable condition but it modulates our mind not to go in depressing stage for example people don't find their jobs interesting still they are doing it because all of them accepted it and working to make end meet or think that they will get their desired post or job eventually over the time. it's always a state of mind to accpet the situation and wait for the time to get things automatically back to normal. It will let person in state of grief and solitary. But challenging the tough time is best thing a person can do. everyone is not born as fighter but the everyone shall try to improve the situation as waiting for time to heal might not make difference but continous effort can make difference for example if a person is living alone and don't know how to cook one thing that person can do is to get the food order or make it by himself. Depending delivery cannot develop any new skill or if due to some reason that delivery wouldn't happen, it will make that person suffer unless, he try to cook every day it may happen he will not get the desired taste but working consistently over the same can help him to overcome this non-favourable sitation. In my opinion, one should always struggle to do the best in their hard times.
In this world of unknown, plant
is divided
into two halves whether to accept
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bad
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situation
or not to
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agree
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over
the same and try harder to overcome those difficult
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times
. Both of the point have a strong hold looking
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over
the
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idea
of accepting the
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bad
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situation
as fate. Accepting the
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bad
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times
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helps
the brain to prepare will for that sudden low. Although, things are not in
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favourable
condition
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but
it modulates our mind not to go in depressing stage
for example
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people
don't find their jobs interesting
still
they are doing it
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because
all of them
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accepted
it and working to
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make
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end
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meet
or
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think
that they will
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get
their desired post or job
eventually
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over
the
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time
.
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it
's always a state of mind to
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accpet
the
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situation
and wait for the
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time
to
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get
things
automatically
back to normal. It will
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let
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person
in state of grief and solitary.
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But
challenging the tough
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time
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is best
thing a
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person
can do. everyone is not born as fighter
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but
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the everyone
shall try to
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improve
the
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situation
as waiting for
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time
to heal might not
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make
difference
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but
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continous
effort can
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make
difference
for example
if a
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person
is living alone and don't know how to cook one thing that
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person
can do is to
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get
the food order or
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make
it by himself.
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Depending
delivery cannot develop any new
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skill
or if due to
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some
reason that delivery wouldn't happen, it will
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make
that
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person
suffer unless, he
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try
to cook every day it may happen he will not
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get
the desired taste
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but
working
consistently
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over
the same can
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help
him to overcome this
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non-favourable
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sitation
. In my opinion, one should always struggle to do the best in their
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hard
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times
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IELTS essay Good situation and bad situation

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
297 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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