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we went to school by bus but afterwards the tyre is blast then driver changed the tyre and we were the much late in school. After that when we arrived at school gate , prayer was over. then we go to class room but think that without attend in prayer it's very bad habit, they are doing this.Consequntly, when I'm was childhood. also I did same like this but after that I understand it's very bad thing.

we went to school by bus but afterwards the tyre is blast then driver changed the tyre and we were the much late in school. After that when we arrived at school gate, prayer was over. then we go to class room but think that without attend in prayer it's very bad habit, they are doing this. Consequntly, when I'm was childhood. also I did same like this but after that I understand it's very bad thing. BlRba
we went to school by bus but afterwards the tyre is blast then driver changed the tyre and we were the much late in school. After that when we arrived at school gate, prayer was over. then we go to class room but think that without attend in prayer it's very bad habit, they are doing this. Consequntly, when I'm was childhood. also I did same like this but after that I understand it's very bad thing.
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we
went to school by bus
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but
afterwards the
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tyre
is blast then driver
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changed
the
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tyre and
we were the much late in school. After that when we arrived at school gate, prayer was over.
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then
we go to
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class
room
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but
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think
that without attend in prayer it's
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very
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bad
habit, they are doing this.
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Consequntly
, when I'm
Consider using a past participle here: "been".
was
childhood.
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also
I did same like this
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but
after that I understand it's
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very
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bad
thing.

IELTS essay we went to school by bus but afterwards the tyre is blast then driver changed the tyre and we were the much late in school. After that when we arrived at school gate, prayer was over. then we go to class room but think that without attend in prayer it's very bad habit, they are doing this. Consequntly, when I'm was childhood. also I did same like this but after that I understand it's very bad thing.

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  American English
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77 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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