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We walked for three hours, and then we sat and enjoyed the view. I arrived home as the sun just went down. The explorers tried to leave their camp, but the weather was still too bad. After three hours we still were lost. We were three days from anywhere, but we had only food and water for one more day. The jungle is hot. There are also many dangerous animals.

We walked for three hours, and then we sat and enjoyed the view. I arrived home as the sun just went down. The explorers tried to leave their camp, but the weather was still too bad. After three hours we still were lost. We were three days from anywhere, but we had only food and water for one more day. The jungle is hot. There are also many dangerous animals. 1bA27
We walked for three hours, and then we sat and enjoyed the view. I arrived home as the sun just went down. The explorers tried to leave their camp, but the weather was still too bad. After three hours we still were lost. We were three days from anywhere, but we had only food and water for one more day. The jungle is hot. There are also many dangerous animals. I was going on trip in ari. In the usa, onlh the grand is bigger anf it has lost of visitors. Unfortunately.
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IELTS essay We walked for three hours, and then we sat and enjoyed the view. I arrived home as the sun just went down. The explorers tried to leave their camp, but the weather was still too bad. After three hours we still were lost. We were three days from anywhere, but we had only food and water for one more day. The jungle is hot. There are also many dangerous animals.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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