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We live in a technology age. However, technology cannot solve all the world's problems

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Technology plays a very important role in today's world. It has improved people's lives in different ways. However there are some aspects that technology cannot solve the problem like a key role in environment education and health issues. Though some people argue that to pay less attention to the technology and more on other values. Furthermore details on this will discuss in this order Some people believe that technology cannot solve all the issue. According to them more importance should be given to other values like old culture and natural techniques. For example in past years medicine prepared by using homemade products and organic materials to cure the diseases. This should be used in today's world to have a grativy towards this point in using ethical values
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IELTS essay We live in a technology age. However, technology cannot solve all the world's problems

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
126 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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