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As we know technology is flourishing by leaps and bounds. When we talk about mass media, a myriad number of individuals considered that there information which is provided to us via mass communication sources must be based on facts instead of man made opinions. Hence, i agree with the said notion. Still, we can not rely on media organisations. To embark on, in the modern era, the mass media is rulling out the globe in term of broadcasting the information. For example, nowadays everyone watch news channels in order to get themselves updated. So in this way it is communication industry's responsibility to showcase the reality of situations what is going around the world instead of mislead the generation by giving fake news. Moreover, it is assumed by public that some media houses work under pressure and they have to broadcast what they have been told by high authorities and simultaneously they attack on their rivals in person by showing rumours about them. Consequently, the common public enraged by these rumours, and simultaneously the peace of country is disturbed. Furthermore, if we peep into the world of communication firms. Then we get to know that the things which are being showing on television are not as true as they should be. For example, in 2020 when covid came and all of sudden all media channels started to showing that the end of world is coming near as per astrologists. And this made public into thread if they are going to die. In addition, news paper have been considered as a most convenient way to bring news from door to door. Almost elder people enjoy reading news papers and if they get such sort of news over there and it could be more dangerous to them as Some people apply it on the heart and due to which they become mentally ill. To conclude, I would say that all information media should be independent and work independently in order to spread humanity. and peace. The truth should be come forefront.
As we know technology is flourishing by leaps and bounds. When we talk about mass
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
media
, a myriad number of individuals considered that there information which
is provided
to us via mass communication sources
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
be based
on facts
instead
of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
man
made opinions.
Hence
,
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i
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agree
with the said notion.
Still
, we can not rely on
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media
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organisations
.

To embark on, in the modern era, the mass
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media
is
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rulling
out the globe in term of broadcasting the information.
For example
, nowadays everyone
The pronoun 'everyone' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "watches", "watched".
watch
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news
channels in order to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
themselves updated.
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So
in this way it is communication industry's responsibility to showcase the reality of situations what is going around the world
instead
of mislead the generation by giving fake
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news
.
Moreover
, it
is assumed
by public that
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some
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media
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houses
work under
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pressure and
they
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have to
broadcast what they have been
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told
by high authorities and
simultaneously
they attack on their rivals in person by showing
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rumours
about them.
Consequently
, the common public enraged by these
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rumours
, and
simultaneously
the peace of country
is disturbed
.

Furthermore
, if we peep into the world of communication firms. Then we
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
to know that the things which are being showing on television are not as true as they should be.
For example
, in 2020 when
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covid
came and all of sudden all
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media
channels
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
started
to showing that the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
end
of world is coming near as per astrologists. And this made public into thread if they are going to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
die
.

In addition
,
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news paper
have
been considered
as a most convenient way to bring
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news
from door to door. Almost elder
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
enjoy reading
This word is normally spelled as one.
news papers
and if they
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
such sort of
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news
over there and it could be more
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dangerous
to them as
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Some
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people
apply it on the heart and due to which they become mentally ill.

To conclude
, I would say that all information
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
media
should be independent and work
independently
in order to spread humanity.
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and
peace. The truth should be
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come
forefront.
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IELTS essay we know technology is flourishing by leaps and bounds. When

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  American English
5 paragraphs
339 words
6.0
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