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We don't grow when things are easy, we grow when we face challenges. Challenges increase interest in learning

We don't grow when things are easy, we grow when we face challenges. Challenges increase interest in learning bb3pg
We don't grow when things are easy, we grow when we face challenges. Challenges increase interest in learning. I recently completed my BSCSE from United International University, Bangladesh. We have to do a final year project or thesis for completing our graduation degree. So, I and some of my friends make a group for doing the Final year project. We decided to do a project base on Network. We create a con-temporary cellular network. Using that network we can communicate with others through messaging and voice calls. We completed our graduation by submitting that project. After completing my graduation I joined GIGA TECH as an Inter. I started working on a project called BanglaSentiWordNet. It was a project that bases on machine learning. The whole works were data-related. I knew python. But when I started the project with my team, I face some challenges. All of my team member's major was on Machine Learning but my major was on Network. After facing challenges, I started learning more. It increases my interest in that field.
We don't grow when things are easy, we grow when we face
challenges
.
Challenges
increase interest in
learning
. I recently completed my
BSCSE
from United International University, Bangladesh. We
have to
do a final year
project
or thesis for completing our graduation degree.
So
, I and
some
of my friends
make
a group for doing the Final year
project
. We decided to do a
project
base on
Network
. We create a con-temporary cellular
network
. Using that
network
we can communicate with others through messaging and voice calls. We completed our graduation by submitting that project.

After
completing my graduation I
joined
GIGA
TECH as
an Inter
. I
started
working on a
project
called
BanglaSentiWordNet
. It was a
project
that bases on machine
learning
. The whole works were data-related. I knew python.
But
when I
started
the
project
with my team, I face
some
challenges
. All of my team member's major was on Machine
Learning
but
my major was on
Network
. After facing
challenges
, I
started
learning
more. It increases my interest in that field.
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IELTS essay We don't grow when things are easy, we grow when we face challenges. Challenges increase interest in learning

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