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In this present time, the awareness of environmental problems among mass individuals have proliferated significantly. Their spontaneous and active contribution have started filling up the gaps towards this cause. I strongly disagree with this statement as government and large companies only contribute towards reforming and imposing certain laws and is just a part of this process whereas the individuals are the grassroots level change makers. In reality, government and large companies play lead role in structuring laws around improving the environmental issues and pouring funds to facilitate the infrastructure around it. However, it is impossible to monitor and measure the actual output from this. But, at a smaller scale individuals are making the major difference by treating the cause from a grass-root level, getting the job done at the initial stage. For example, Indian Government has imposed the “Swach Bharat Abhiyaan” movement to improve the environment, but the consistency faile

In this present time, the awareness of environmental problems among mass individuals have proliferated significantly. Their spontaneous and active contribution have started filling up the gaps towards this cause. I strongly disagree with this statement as government and large companies only contribute towards reforming and imposing certain laws and is just a part of this process whereas the individuals are the grassroots level change makers. In reality, government and large companies play lead role in structuring laws around improving the environmental issues and pouring funds to facilitate the infrastructure around it. However, it is impossible to monitor and measure the actual output from this. But, at a smaller scale individuals are making the major difference by treating the cause from a grass-root level, getting the job done at the initial stage. For example, Indian Government has imposed the “Swach Bharat Abhiyaan” movement to improve the environment, but the consistency faile Kn3e3
In this present time, the awareness of environmental problems among mass individuals have proliferated significantly. Their spontaneous and active contribution have started filling up the gaps towards this cause. I strongly disagree with this statement as government and large companies only contribute towards reforming and imposing certain laws and is just a part of this process whereas the individuals are the grassroots level change makers. In reality, government and large companies play lead role in structuring laws around improving the environmental issues and pouring funds to facilitate the infrastructure around it. However, it is impossible to monitor and measure the actual output from this. But, at a smaller scale individuals are making the major difference by treating the cause from a grass-root level, getting the job done at the initial stage. For example, Indian Government has imposed the “Swach Bharat Abhiyaan” movement to improve the environment, but the consistency failed miserably whereas individuals have made life easier for the government by only segregation of dry and wet waste at their home level which sums to some major contributions. Hence, I strongly agree that individuals are contributing towards flourishing the environment. In addition environmental issues being a hot topic, the army of individuals have expanded exponentially towards this cause. Many groups, non-profit organisations and individuals are now stepping up proactively without even waiting for the government and the companies to act. For example, there is non-profit organisation in UK known as “Surfers Against Sewage” which takes action to protect oceans, beaches, wildlife and forests. Their actions caused a reduction in 17% of pollution across all beaches and it’s surrounding areas of UK. But they always depends on individual charity contributors whereas they fail to receive any support from the government and other large conglomerates creating a bottle neck to contribute more. Thus, I agree that the power of individuals maximise and makes the major difference in a wholistic improvement of the environment. To conclude, portable efforts made by individuals are not only contributing towards the improvement of the environment but also encouraging other individuals to join the force. Having said that I strongly agree that individual efforts are more weighty and impact full with respect to what government and other large companies does.
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have proliferated
significantly
. Their spontaneous and active contribution have
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started
filling up the gaps towards this cause. I
strongly
disagree with this statement as
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government
and
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large
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companies
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only
contribute towards reforming and imposing certain laws and is
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just
a part of this process whereas the
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individuals
are the grassroots level
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change
makers.

In reality,
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and
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large
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companies
play lead role in structuring laws around improving the environmental issues and pouring funds to facilitate
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the infrastructure around it
.
However
, it is impossible to monitor and measure the actual output from this.
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But
, at a smaller scale
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individuals
are making the major difference by treating the cause from a grass-root level, getting the job done at the initial stage.
For example
, Indian
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Government
has imposed the “
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Swach
Bharat
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Abhiyaan
” movement to
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improve
the environment,
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but
the consistency failed
miserably
whereas
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individuals
have made life easier for the
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government
by
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only
segregation of dry and wet waste at their home level which sums to
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some
major contributions.
Hence
, I
strongly
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agree
that
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individuals
are contributing towards flourishing the environment.

In
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addition
environmental issues being a hot topic, the army of
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individuals
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have
expanded
exponentially
towards this cause.
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Many
groups, non-profit
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organisations
and
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individuals
are
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now
stepping up
proactively
without even waiting for the
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government
and the
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companies
to act.
For example
, there is non-profit
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organisation
in UK known as “Surfers Against Sewage” which takes action to protect oceans, beaches, wildlife and forests. Their actions caused a reduction in 17% of pollution across all beaches and it’s surrounding areas of UK.
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But
they always
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depends
on
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individual
charity contributors whereas they fail to receive any support from the
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government
and other
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large
conglomerates creating a
This word is normally spelled as one.
bottle neck
to contribute more.
Thus
, I
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agree
that the power of
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individuals
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maximise
and
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makes
the major difference in a
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wholistic
improvement of the environment.

To conclude
, portable efforts made by
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individuals
are not
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only
contributing towards the improvement of the environment
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but
also
encouraging other
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individuals
to
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join
the force. Having said that I
strongly
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agree
that
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individual
efforts are more weighty and impact
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full with
respect to what
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and other
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large
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companies
does.
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IELTS essay In this present time, the awareness of environmental problems among mass individuals have proliferated significantly. Their spontaneous and active contribution have started filling up the gaps towards this cause. I strongly disagree with this statement as government and large companies only contribute towards reforming and imposing certain laws and is just a part of this process whereas the individuals are the grassroots level change makers. In reality, government and large companies play lead role in structuring laws around improving the environmental issues and pouring funds to facilitate the infrastructure around it. However, it is impossible to monitor and measure the actual output from this. But, at a smaller scale individuals are making the major difference by treating the cause from a grass-root level, getting the job done at the initial stage. For example, Indian Government has imposed the “Swach Bharat Abhiyaan” movement to improve the environment, but the consistency faile

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5.5
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