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We do not take the environmental problem seriously.

We do not take the environmental problem seriously. W5q2D
Day by day lots of people are polluting the environment. The main reasons that pollutants from factories, air pollution, water pollution, cutting down trees. How is the environment polluted? For example, toxic gases from factories pollute the environment, and cutting down trees reduces oxygen. The fact is that launch of rockets into space by humans leads to the destruction of the ozone layer. What is the ozone layer? The ozone layer a layer as thick as paper that does not transmit life-threatening rays from the sun. Nevertheless, we continue to do these things to the environment.
Day by day lots of
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are polluting the
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environment
. The main reasons that pollutants from factories, air pollution, water pollution, cutting down trees. How is the
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environment
polluted?
For example
, toxic gases from factories pollute the
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environment
, and cutting down trees
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reduces
oxygen. The fact is that launch of rockets into space by humans leads to the destruction of the ozone
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layer
. What is the ozone
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layer
? The ozone
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layer
a
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layer
as thick as paper that does not transmit life-threatening rays from the sun.
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, we continue to do these things to the
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environment
.
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IELTS essay We do not take the environmental problem seriously.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
96 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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