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We are wired at all times. Smart phones have changed the way we communicate with people in the world. More than its advantages , it is seen as distraction. How badly is your society influenced and what solutions are to stay away from this device? Discuss.

We are wired at all times. Smart phones have changed the way we communicate with people in the world. More than its advantages, it is seen as distraction. How badly is your society influenced and what solutions are to stay away from this device? Discuss. mGyN

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