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We always say that there is a generation gap and there always will be. What causes generation gap? Is there no way to strike a balance in the relations between two generations? Give your opinion and support it with reasons.

We always say that there is a generation gap and there always will be. What causes generation gap? Is there no way to strike a balance in the relations between two generations? Give your opinion and support it with reasons. Kw6DM
The concept of generation gap has spread widely in the last century. In a few words, this concept can be described as the differences in behaviour and opinions visible in different age groups. Even though the term itself can provide an idea of the main reasons behind this phenomenon, there are various factors to its origin and possible solutions to be considered when it comes to this topic. First of all, it's important to understand that generation gaps ocurr due to changes in the up bringing and environment through out decades. For example, if our parents where taught to pray and follow religious traditions, it's natural for them to be surprised when our kids don't give the same importance to those subjects. The same happens with technology, considering that kids born in early 2000's grew up highly exposed to modern devices, the usage of those comes natural to them, while for older generations it may be a difficult task to achieve. Therefore, the main factor that creates the phenomenon of generation gap is the different time in which people are brought up and the different characteristics present in each time period. This problem can contribute to troubled relationships between people of different ages but I do belive that there are some measures that can be taken in order to help. As a main factor, tolerance is always going to be key since older people and younger people need to understand the reasoning behind each other's attitudes. Then the commitment to teach others can help to improve that understanding, Last but not least, listening to the others can provide a new vision of the whole picture that the other one sees. In conclusion, generation gap is definetly going to exist forever but working together and teach others can help everyone to navigate trough any difficulty.
The concept of generation
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gap
has spread
widely
in the last century. In a few words, this concept can be
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described
as the differences in
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behaviour
and opinions visible in
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different
age groups.
Even though
the term itself can provide an
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idea
of the main reasons behind this phenomenon, there are various factors to its origin and possible solutions to
be considered
when it
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comes
to this topic.

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important
to understand that generation
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gaps
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ocurr
due to
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changes
in the up bringing and environment
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through out
decades.
For example
, if our parents where taught to pray and follow religious traditions, it's natural for them to
be surprised
when our kids don't give the same importance to those subjects. The same happens with technology, considering that kids born in early
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2000's
grew up
highly
exposed to modern devices, the usage of those
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comes
natural to them, while for older generations it may be a difficult task to achieve.
Therefore
, the main factor that creates the phenomenon of generation
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gap
is the
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different
time in which
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people
are brought
up and the
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different
characteristics present in each time period.

This problem can contribute to troubled relationships between
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people
of
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different
ages
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but
I
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that there are
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some
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help
. As a main factor, tolerance is always going to be key since older
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people
and younger
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people
need to understand the reasoning behind each other's attitudes. Then the commitment to teach others can
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help
to
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improve
that understanding, Last
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but
not least, listening to the others can provide a new vision of the whole picture that the
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other
one
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.

In conclusion
, generation
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gap
is
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definetly
going to exist forever
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but
working together and teach others can
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help
everyone to navigate trough any difficulty.
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IELTS essay We always say that there is a generation gap and there always will be. What causes generation gap? Is there no way to strike a balance in the relations between two generations? Give your opinion and support it with reasons.

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