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Some people think that there is a great influence of news media on people's lives and this is a negative development. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some people think that there is a great influence of news media on people's lives and this is a negative development. PVy6j
The news is a daily part of life for many people. One point of contention is whether the news media's huge impact on people's daily lives indicates a negative trend. In my opinion, the news media benefits society more than it harms it. To begin with, new media outlets have made significant contributions to information dissemination. For example, the Internet allowed widespread knowledge of the Covid-19 outbreak. It's likely that if these videos hadn't been made available to a worldwide audience, the whole incident would have claimed far more lives than it did. As this example demonstrates, contemporary news media enables the human family to keep an eye on one another and provide assistance when necessary. Furthermore, news media outlets have brought social problems to light that would otherwise go unnoticed by many people. Take, for example, Asian racism. As more Covid-19 cases and deaths are reported, negative attitudes and discrimination against Asians are on the rise. Media platforms disseminated advertisements to combat racism and discrimination against Asian people. As a result, social media companies such as Twitter, Instagram, and Facebook have all taken steps to address the problem. Their networks have been used to help those who have been abused. On their blogs, campaigns such as posts with the hashtag #IAmNotAVirus have been promoted atop user feeds. To summarize, I believe that news media is a positive phenomenon, and it is hoped that, with the aid of technology and modern tools, press freedom will continue to flourish.
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is a daily part of life for
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people
. One point of contention is whether the
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media's huge impact on
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people
's daily
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lives
indicates a
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negative
trend. In my opinion, the
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news
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media
benefits society more than it harms it.

To
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begin
with,
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new
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outlets have made significant contributions to information dissemination.
For example
, the Internet
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allowed
widespread knowledge of the Covid-19 outbreak. It's likely that if these videos hadn't
been made
available to a worldwide audience, the whole incident would have claimed far more
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lives
than it did. As this example demonstrates, contemporary
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news
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media
enables the human family to
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keep
an eye on one another and provide assistance when necessary.

Furthermore
,
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news
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media
outlets have brought social problems to light that would
otherwise
go unnoticed by
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
. Take,
for example
, Asian racism. As more Covid-19 cases and deaths
are reported
,
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negative
attitudes and discrimination against Asians are on the rise.
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Media
platforms disseminated advertisements to combat racism and discrimination against Asian
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people
.
As a result
, social
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media
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companies
such as Twitter, Instagram, and Facebook have all taken steps to address the problem. Their networks have been
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used
to
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help
those who have
been abused
. On their blogs, campaigns such as posts with the hashtag #
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IAmNotAVirus
have
been promoted
atop user feeds.

To summarize
, I believe that
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news
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media
is a
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positive
phenomenon, and it
is hoped
that, with the aid of technology and modern tools, press freedom will continue to flourish.
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IELTS essay Some people think that there is a great influence of news media on people's lives and this is a negative development.

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