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Ways to prevent frogs from extinction

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The passage and the talk both discuss the declining in the population of frogs and the methods to prevent their extinction. The writer contends that by implementing some works like legislating new rules in using pesticides, using some drugs for fungus treatment, and also eliciting less water by humans we can save these frogs from dying out. The lecturer, however, refutes the author's assessments. She demonstrates three reason to cast doubt on the claim made in the reading. The first allegation of the script against which the orator argues is that one of the threats to the frogs is the pesticides used by farmers and new strict rules should restrict the usage of these chemical materials. In contrast, the professor highlights the fact that it would not be economical and functional, because ultimate cost of harvests would increase. She further asserts that this would be disadvantage for the farming and they could not keep the pace of competing with other farms, which have not been imposed by these laws. Second, according to the text, another deadly element for the frogs is fungus, and we should use some treatments for them; although the speaker finds this idea debatable. She bolsters her opinion by stating that this remedy should use for every single frog. Therefore in that large scale it would be difficult to carry out, and is not practical. Furthermore, this drug do not pass to their offspring, and it must be use again for the next generation one by one. Lastly, the lecture contradicts this fallacy of the passage that frogs' habitat is threatening by human activities like overusing of water resources, saying that the major factor which endangers their residence is global warming.

The passage and the talk both discuss the declining in the population of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtoad
frogs
 and the methods to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :preclude
prevent
 their extinction. The writer contends that by implementing This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 works like legislating new This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :requirements
rules
 in using pesticides, using This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 drugs for fungus treatment, and also
 eliciting less water by humans we can save these You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtoad
frogs
 from dying out. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
 lecturer, however
, refutes the author's assessments. She demonstrates three reason to cast doubt on the claim made in the reading.

The first
 allegation of the script against which the orator argues is that one of the threats to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtoad
frogs
 is the pesticides This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 by farmers and new strict This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :requirements
rules
 should restrict the usage of these chemical materials. In contrast
, the professor highlights the fact that it would not be economical and functional, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 ultimate cost of harvests would increase. She further
 asserts that this would be disadvantage for the Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).farming, and
farming and
 they could not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
keep
 the pace of competing with other farms, which have not been imposed
 by these laws.

Second, according to the text, another deadly element for the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtoad
frogs
 is fungus, and we should This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 treatments for them; although the speaker finds this This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :thoughtconceptnotion
idea
 debatable. She bolsters her opinion by stating that this remedy should This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 for every single You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtoad
frog
. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Therefore,
Therefore
 in that large scale it would be difficult to carry out, and is not practical. Furthermore
, The verb 'do' is plural. Did you mean: "this drug does"? Did you use a verb instead of a noun?this drug does
this drug do
 not pass to their offspring, and it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
 be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 again for the next
 generation one by one.

Lastly
, the lecture contradicts this fallacy of the passage that frogs' habitat is threatening by human activities like overusing of water resources, saying that the major factor which endangers their residence is global warming. 