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The material discusses the concept of dealing with forest fires by salvage logging.

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The material discusses the concept of dealing with forest fires by salvage logging. While the reading looks at the topic from one perspective, the listening challenges certain points outlined in the reading passage. Firstly, the reading details specific points regarding this topic, namely cleaning up the forest after fires could create the right condition for trees' growth. Next, removing the dead trees could reduce insect populations that may damage live trees. Finally, salvage logging has economic benefits and could create new job opportunities. Conversely, the listening challenges the points, one specific contradiction is rapid removing of dead trees could lake nutrients that could be necessary for the growth of the live tree. In addition to that, dead trees could increase the growth of some bark betttle; however, it could increase the growth of other birds and insects that contribute to healthy forests. One final point, salvage logging does not have any economic benefits; given that it is done by using helicopters which is very expensive. Furthermore, creating jobs for local society will be temporary, and fill by outside workers because local residents are not trained enough. In summary, there are discrepancies in the information presented.
The material discusses the concept of dealing with forest fires by salvage logging. While the reading looks at the topic from one perspective, the listening challenges certain
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points
outlined in the reading passage.

Firstly
, the reading
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details
specific
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points
regarding this topic,
namely
cleaning up the forest after fires could create the right condition for trees'
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
growth
.
Next
, removing the dead
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trees
could
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
reduce
insect populations that may damage
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
trees
.
Finally
, salvage logging has economic benefits and could create new job opportunities.

Conversely
, the listening challenges the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
points
, one specific contradiction is rapid removing of dead
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
trees
could lake nutrients that could be necessary for the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
growth
of the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
tree
.
In addition
to that, dead
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
trees
could increase the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
growth
of
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
bark
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betttle
;
however
, it could increase the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
growth
of other birds and insects that contribute to healthy forests. One final
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
point
, salvage logging does not have any economic benefits;
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
given
that it
is done
by using helicopters which is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
expensive.
Furthermore
, creating jobs for local society will be temporary, and fill by outside workers
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
local residents are not trained
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
enough
.

In summary, there are discrepancies in the information presented.
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IELTS essay The material discusses the concept of dealing with forest fires by salvage logging.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
195 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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