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Do you prefer one long holiday or several short holidays? Why?

Do you prefer one long holiday or several short holidays? Why? Q5oy9
Because we should to take a break from work from time to time, I think several short vacations are better, and in my opinion, one of the reasons why we need a vacation from time to time is to return to work with new and creative ideas, also from the reasons is our bodies need to rest because we can’t continue to work without rest and also we need time with family and friends and short vacations help us to get time with them. It is possible that short vacations will not enable us to travel and get away from cities for a long time, but we can go to a nearby place to relax.
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IELTS essay Do you prefer one long holiday or several short holidays? Why?

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
115 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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