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 Water scarcity is a serious problem in many countries. What are the causes of this？And what solutions can be done by individuals and the government?

 Water scarcity is a serious problem in many countries. What are the causes of this？And what solutions can be done by individuals and the government? gm73
Despite knowing about water and problem in a number of countries. This essay will examine the main causes of the water problem and possible solutions to this problem. The two main causes of people wastewater a lot of time and construction the huge buildings, industries and a plethora of more. Every day we think about our water resources. In our daily life, we do not waste water a lot more. Because of that, in our besides countries such as the India, Pakistan and like to the African people faces water need. The Punjab area city people are walking for a long time and after they wait a long line then they collect the water by measure system. Also, people will not think about their future because, at present time, we build huge buildings, shopping malls. industries and a number of others. As a result, the water layer destroys and differences along with distances between soil and water. For instance, scientists say that if we continuously follow that method in the future we suffer a number of problems. Before anyone will build up any constructions must check the soil and water test. Some possible solutions to this problem are protecting water pollution and promoting awareness among people. Firstly, in our houses, we are using water-limited ways. Then, in our daily garbage does not through the rivers, canals, ponds, drains because it pollutes the water. This way, people will be more conscious of the environment and won't overuse or waste its resources. To sum up, people's activities that change the water waste have a negative impact on the world's ecosystem. However, we can significantly re-cycle our water by rainy seasons and enlighting people about this problem.
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in a number of countries. This essay will examine the main causes of the
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water
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problem
and possible solutions to this
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. The two main causes of
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wastewater
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time and construction the huge buildings, industries and a plethora of more. Every day we
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think
about our
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resources. In our daily life, we do not waste
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water
a lot more.
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Because
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countries such as the India, Pakistan and like to the African
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people
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faces
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need. The Punjab area city
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people
are walking for a long time and after they wait a long line then they collect the
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water
by measure system.
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,
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people
will not
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think
about their future
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because
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industries
and a number of others.
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, the
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layer
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destroys
and differences along with distances between soil and
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water
.
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, scientists say that if we
continuously
follow that method in the future we suffer a number of
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problems
.
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Before
anyone will build up any constructions
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must
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the soil and
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.
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Some
possible solutions to this
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are protecting
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pollution and promoting awareness among
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people
.
Firstly
, in our
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houses
, we are using water-limited ways. Then, in our daily garbage does not through the rivers, canals, ponds, drains
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because
it pollutes the
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water
. This way,
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people
will be more conscious of the environment and won't overuse or waste its resources. To sum up,
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people
's activities that
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change
the
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water
waste have a
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negative
impact on the world's ecosystem.
However
, we can
significantly
re-cycle our
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water
by rainy seasons and
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enlighting
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people
about this
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IELTS essay  Water scarcity is a serious problem in many countries. What are the causes of this？And what solutions can be done by individuals and the government?

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
284 words
5.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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