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Watching TV and movies alone

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Currently, most people enjoy having several entertainment tools in their homes. And most are for sure subscribed to one or two applications related to entertainment and movies. Therefore, nowadays anyone is accessible to entertainment at any time and due to working hours for late time. Family and friends are less in encountering and seeing each other's like before. So, movie time or even watching a series has become a lonely task that anyone can enjoy at any time even at work. From my point of view, I prefer to stay at home enjoying a bowl of popcorn and watch TV after finishing all my home duties and time with the kids. so I can enjoy the time watching. Moreover, watching the movie alone will allow you to choose the desired movie without any objection from any partner. In addition to that, you can stop the movie and continue watching any time you want. So the benefits and advantages of watching the movie alone are more than anyone can expect but for sure there are others who are more interested to watch the movie together and have certain rituals for that night after along week or day. at the end, it depends on a person's lifestyle and needs, which cannot be categorized.
Currently
, most
people
enjoy having several entertainment tools in their homes. And most are for sure subscribed to one or two applications related to entertainment and
movies
.
Therefore
, nowadays anyone is accessible to entertainment at any
time
and due to working hours for late
time
. Family and friends are less in encountering and seeing each other's like
before
.
So
,
movie
time
or even watching a series has become a lonely task that anyone can enjoy at any
time
even at work. From my point of view, I prefer to stay at home enjoying a bowl of popcorn and
watch
TV after finishing all my home duties and
time
with the kids.
so
I can enjoy the
time
watching.
Moreover
, watching the
movie
alone will
allow
you to choose the desired
movie
without any objection from any partner.
In addition
to that, you can
stop
the
movie
and continue watching any
time
you want.
So
the benefits and advantages of watching the
movie
alone are more than anyone can
expect
but
for sure there are others who are more interested to
watch
the
movie
together and have certain rituals for that night after along week or day.
at
the
end
, it depends on a person's lifestyle and needs, which cannot
be categorized
.
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IELTS essay Watching TV and movies alone

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
211 words
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