Watching television is bad for children. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use your own knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence. v.2
Watching television is bad for children. Use your own knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence. v. 2
In this contemporary world, technology is arising at fast pace. with this advancement, one of the oldest electronic devices such as television set is also plays an important role in our society. Some people believe that watching TV is harmful for kids. However, in my opinion, television have some positive impact on child's intellectual development along with some side effects.
First of all, Television helps to explore the knowledge and imagination power of an infant. While watching different programmes on television a child starts to generate a story or an imaginable picture in his or her mind which inturn wider the perspective of a child to see things from different angles. In evidence to this, I would like to elaborate my own childhood example, when i was just 9 years old i was quite fancy to watch different art and craft shows that built my interest in drawing classes. Consequently, In my class I started to present some different art works with the help of my imagination which i created through various television art series. So, watching televison proved as the best for me as a child.
On the other side, the people who believe that watching televsion is not good for children, they think so because most of the children watch TV programmes for long hours which disturbs their offspring's regular scheduled activities such as playing, eating, studying and sleeping. Consequently, this habit halts the physcial growth of a child inspite of intellectual growth. For example, when a child watch screen continuously without getting interrupted, his eye sight might suffer due to the impact of hazardous Ultra Voilet rays emrged from TV screen. Similarly, child may face some health issues like insomnia, sickness, weakness, indigestion etcetera. Hence, this is the reason, why some people thought that televsion is bad for children.
To conclude, TV sets plays an important role in elaborating the knowledge of a child whereas, long hour watching televsion may put child into some serious health hazards. But, these physical problems might be eliminated by proper scheduling of daily activities, which is to be done by a child.
In this contemporary world, technology is arising at
fast
pace.
with
this advancement, one of the oldest electronic devices such as
television
set is
also
plays an
important
role in our society.
Some
people
believe that watching TV is harmful for kids.
However
, in my opinion,
television
have
some
positive
impact on child's intellectual development along with
some
side effects.
First of all
,
Television
helps
to explore the knowledge and imagination power of an infant. While watching
different
programmes
on
television
a
child
starts
to generate a story or an imaginable picture in
his or her
mind which
inturn
wider the perspective of a
child
to
see
things from
different
angles. In evidence to this, I would like to elaborate my
own
childhood example, when
i
was
just
9 years
old
i
was quite fancy to
watch
different
art and craft
shows
that built my interest in drawing classes.
Consequently
, In my
class
I
started
to present
some
different
art works with the
help
of my imagination which
i
created through various
television
art series.
So
, watching
televison
proved as the best for me as a child.
On the other side, the
people
who believe that watching
televsion
is not
good
for children, they
think
so
because
most of the children
watch
TV
programmes
for long hours which disturbs their offspring's regular scheduled activities such as playing, eating, studying and sleeping.
Consequently
, this habit halts the
physcial
growth of a
child
inspite
of intellectual growth.
For example
, when a
child
watch
screen
continuously
without getting interrupted, his
eye sight
might suffer due to the impact of hazardous Ultra
Voilet rays
emrged
from TV screen.
Similarly
,
child
may face
some
health issues like insomnia, sickness, weakness, indigestion etcetera.
Hence
, this is the reason, why
some
people
thought
that
televsion
is
bad
for children.
To conclude
, TV sets plays an
important
role in elaborating the knowledge of a
child
whereas, long hour watching
televsion
may put
child
into
some
serious health hazards.
But
, these physical problems might
be eliminated
by proper scheduling of daily activities, which is to
be done
by a
child
.
10Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
17Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
17Mistakes