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waste mangement in office

To Whom It May Concern, The purpose of writing today is to bring your attention towards the waste management process followed at our office premises. Recently, I have been observing that most of the employees have been disposing the recyclable items like paper waste, juice boxes etc along with the regular garbage and in fact, it been the same situation in the cafeteria as well. To add my distress, in the cafeteria, the green colour bins are always full, by having both recyclable wastes with food waste whereas, the blue bin is empty. If we continue doing the same, our company will end up paying fines to the government, as they were strict rules imposed by them last month. May I suggest you put the signboards over the bins where ever it’s required and you can arrange a meeting with maintenance staff to let them know how important is to segregate the waste as per the rules? Also, I would be happy to volunteer myself for this action by sending out mail to all of our staff and also can make an announcement on the floors.
To Whom It May Concern,

The purpose of writing
today
is to bring your attention towards the
waste
management process followed at our office premises.

Recently, I have been observing that most of the employees have been disposing the recyclable items like paper
waste
, juice boxes etc along with the regular garbage and in fact, it
been
the same situation in the cafeteria
as well
. To
add
my distress, in the cafeteria, the green
colour
bins are always full, by having both recyclable
wastes
with food
waste
whereas, the blue bin is empty. If we continue doing the same, our
company
will
end
up paying fines to the
government
, as they were strict
rules
imposed by them last month.

May I suggest you put the signboards over the bins where ever it’s
required and
you can arrange a meeting with maintenance staff to
let
them know how
important
is to segregate the
waste
as per the
rules
?
Also
, I would be happy to volunteer myself for this action by sending out mail to all of our staff and
also
can
make
an announcement on the floors.
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IELTS essay waste mangement in office

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
186 words
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