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From today's video, what did you find the most interesting and why?

From today's video, what did you find the most interesting and why? GN1Px
From today's lecture, I found many things interesting but one topic which took my attention and found challenging was Journalizing or Journal Entry. Journalizing or Journal Entry is the process of recording business transactions from vouchers or invoices into the balance sheet of the business date-wise. But if something went wrong with it, it will create trouble. By mistake, if someone forgets to put one entry, it will be a problem for the company, after all, they are answerable to stakeholders. Due to this small mistake, they won't be able to attract potential investors because no one wants to buy a business that is not confident about its balance sheets.
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if something went
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with it, it will create trouble. By mistake, if someone forgets to put one entry, it will be a problem for the
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company
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after all
, they are answerable to stakeholders. Due to this
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mistake, they won't be able to attract potential investors
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no one wants to
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IELTS essay From today's video, what did you find the most interesting and why?

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